1． Basic information (personal data)
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2. career objective
3. Education background
4. working experience
5. personal qualities
6 language proficiency
7. computer literacy
8 interests and hobbies
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From 1998to2002 Position: assistant to the chief manager
Name and Place of the work unit: ABC Company
Responsibility: compiled reports for the chief engineer on
computer system planning
From to Academic Degree: B.A received in July 1983
Name and Place of the University: Beijing University
Honors, awards and achievements: earned academic scholarship, 2 years, top ten graduates
Activities: literary club, secretary
Published two papers
Among the pertinent courses taken are:
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Hobbies and Interests
1. achieved sales increase by 15*
2. acquired enough experience for ….
3. acted as interpreter for the last 5 years
4. attended all these meetings, and assisted the project manager to make financial decision
5. cooperated a project for a fast food restaurant
6. completed the negotiation and achieved sales increase by *
7. conducted a seminar
8. controlled the budge9. coordinated operations of a hotel with manager
10. created a good image for Co
11. developed marketing skills by working as a salesman for years
12. devised a system which could simplify working process
13. directed a staff of ten in producing the newspaper and selling it
14. experienced in operations of …
15. gained retail experience including the marketing research
16. handled public relations
17. helped coordinate operation of a computer company
18. improved efficiency of work and reduced its expenses
19. initiated and carried out a research project to evaluate the trade market
20. served as an assistant manager in a world-famous chain store
21. supervised 6 person research team for 5 years
22. worked one year as a …
1. 将所有第一人称代词从简历中拿掉（I, we, me, my）, 当然更不能用第三人称代词。
2. 冠词：简历当中不需要冠词，例如：应写retrained staff而不是retrained the staff
3. 助动词：简历当中不需要助动词，所以，应该写managed 而不是have managed
5. being性动词：简历中一律使用主动语态，不要出现am, is, are, were, was等词。
I was born in a small village of Shan Dong Province on April 4th, 1968. When I was young, my family was very poor, so I had to work to earn money to help my parents after class when I was in the middle school.
In 1986 I was admitted by University of International Business and Economics (or: UIBE) to pursue a bachelor degree in Economics. My major is accounting in Department of International Business Management. The undergraduate education gave me a wide range of vision and taught me how to cooperate with others. I developed several professional interests in Accounting, Finance, and International Trade.
The following eight-year working experience offered me a good chance to give full play to my creativity, intelligence and diligence. In 1990-1993, I worked as an assistant to funding manager in China National Technical Import and Export Corporation. In 1993-present, I was employed by China Kingdom Import and Export Corporation to be the Manger of Financial and Accounting Division.
I do believe that with my hard early life, solid educational background and ample working experience, I would be an excellent student of you MBA program.
MY PERSONAL ACCOMPLISHMENT:
After graduating from UIBE, I was employed as the assistant to the funding manager by China National Technical Import and Export Corporation. After reading a lot of related files, and analyzing the overall funding situation of the corporation, I found that the loan policy was not been put into effect. So we have thousands of millions RMB loan with very high interest rate while a large amount of cash in bank with very low interest rate was idle. I reported this to my supervisor, and then we studied and revised the loan policy. This revision saved the corporation approximately RMB thirty millions yuan. In order to raise the funding effectiveness, after one year’s hard work, I developed the internal banking system within the corporation based on the actual funding supply and need of the different divisions and projects. This internal banking system made full use of the corporation’ funding resources, and due to this, I was highly praised by the president of the corporation.
WHY CHOOSE YOUR MBA PROGRAM?
After I have worked in business area for eight years, I feel that I need to continue my education by pursuing a Master degree in business administration. I have practiced my professional expertise in accounting, demonstrated my leadership abilities and perfected my communication skills. But I have yet to become an entrepreneur in my own right, and to fully master the art of modern business. I want to be trained more vigorously in scientific methods of analysis and synthesis. There are a lot of opportunities and challenges in China that I do not yet fell fully confident to seize. My business career has so far benefited mostly the companies that I worked for, but a good business education in your university will probably become a new era for me.
Your university is well known for its excellence in China’s business education. I am sure that, with my extensive business experience, I can be a worthy student of yours. I am anxious to benefit from your seasoned guidance and take advantage of your research facilities.
good morning,my dear teachers,my dear professors.i am very glad to be here for your interview.my name is song yonghao,i am 22 years old .i come from luoyang,a very beautiful aicent city.my undergratuade period will be accomplished in changan university in july ,2004;and now,i am trying my best for obtaining a key to tongji university.
generally speaking ,i am a hard working student especially do the thing i am interested in. i will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is. when i was sophomore, i found web design very interesting, so i learned it very hard . to weaver a homepage for myself, i stayed with my pesonel computer for half a month.,and i am the first one in my class who own his homepage. forthermore,i am a person with great perserverence. during the days preparing for the first examination,i insist on running every day, no matter what the weather was like.and just owning to this,i could concentrate on my study and succeeded in the end.
well ,in my spare time ,i like basketball, tennis and chinese chess. also english is my favorate.i often go to english corner to practise my oral english on every thursday,and write compositions to improve my witten ability .but i know my english is not good enough ,i will continue studying.
ok, that is all,thank you for your attention